Since the majority Moby-Dick
is overly descriptive and informative, it seems kind of strange that
Ishmael nearly explicitly states future events in a weak attempt at
foreshadowing. It comes as a
surprise to me that the expectations of what is going to happen later in the
novel, especially since, “Out of the trunk, the branches grow; out of them, the
twigs. So, in productive subjects, grow the chapters,”(315). This is clear
throughout the book, with much mentioning of the “aforementioned” such and
such, usually involved in the devotion of an entire chapter to describing a
rope, or an area of a boat (ie. The Line,
or The (aptly named) Crotch). One would think that an event
as major as Queequeg’s impending doom, which was made obvious in the beginning
of the novel, would take up at least two or three chapters, rather than just a
mere sentence or two. There is
much back and forth between subjects, mentioning them all in one chapter, then
taking the next few subsequent chapters to discuss each individual subject in
further detail, like the introduction of Chapter 73 that seems to needlessly
mention the fact of the whale head hanging over the side of the ship, but
declines to further elaborate on the subject at that time. Why mention it then,
if it’s not a pressing enough topic to address immediately? Why not just wait,
Ishmael, and talk about things when you intend to completely finish talking
about them? And the aspects an audience is most concerned with, namely the
action, are briefly addressed in a single sentence, such as the “peculiarity of
the whale’s eyes is a thing to always to borne in the mind of the fishery; and
to be remembered by the reader in subsequent scenes,” (360), or in the
conclusion of Chapter 80, “that the great monster is indomitable, you will yet
have reason to know,” (383). Why does Ishmael not devote as much description to
these hints? Is it his attempt at being subtle? If he were being subtle, why
not instead just surprise the reader instead of leading them toward what they
should be expecting? But Elijah and Gabriel’s screaming portents that bad bad
things will happen in the voyage of vengeance upon Moby Dick seem to pretty
clearly delineate the fate of the Pequod and its crew under Ahab; it obviously
won’t end entirely happily. It struck me as strange that so much verbosity
would be spent on the minutest details, but that the major hints are simply
stated without nearly as much eloquence.
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